Saturday, January 8, 2011

this night. Just don't Let me sLeep .


~~~~~~` hi frns..i wrote this deddicating 2 all insomniacS..
wud refine this work smtym.. ryt now.. m too xhausted.. : AzhaR / Jack arrow ~~

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this nighT.. jst .. don't Let me sLeep...
the darker it goes the...
the harder it is.. 4 me... 2 get a sLeep..

haan... yeaaah...
its harder 4 me 2 get a sLeep.



ther r THOUSAND REASONs 2 stay awake..
ther r THOUSAND memories chasing mE...
keepin.. mE awaKe.

m tryin.. to run away..
but this night is so.. Dark,
m failinG 2 find a waY...
its gettin.. darker..
n makin it harder..
4 mE.. 2 get a waY..

ow.. YeaH...
this nighT.. jst .. don't Let me sLeep...
the darker it goes the...
the harder it is.. 4 me... 2 get a sLeep..


i stay awake all night..
tryin 2 get a sleep..
but, u kno.. its so dark-out there..
i prefer chasing my Dreams awake..
i prefer workin 4 m dream.. ( when m awake)
then, waiting 2 catch a sLeep..
n Dream.. till , I am awake.



but, finally i end-up loosing.. to this night..
n i do get a sleep..
wen da worLd is Light up by da sun-light.
n Finally... i get to Sleep....

i get to Sleep....
wen da worLd is Light up by da sun-light.
and when the whoLe worLd is awake.

: Azhar Rizvi / Jack Arrow
9 january 2011 , 1:37 A.M

" ek khwaab hai mera.. ji raha hoon paane use..
paa Liya jis din use..
~ Samjhnaa.. tumhaari duaaon ka asar tha.. " : AzhaR
9 january 2011 , 1:39 A.M

3 comments:

  1. Wonderful lines bro! You've skill to write! You use more of your heart than of you brain... But the only thing required here is arrangement of words... Like, try to use rhyming words... That'll be better & good to hear if the perfect words matches with each other...

    All the best!!!
    Keep penning...
    :)

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  3. Thanks Robin.. i will sureLy take care of those
    things.. :)
    keep motivating me brO'

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